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The city is quiet
As you go for a walk
Just a leisurely stroll
Up and down the block

From the moment I saw you
I knew we would be together
Whether you like it or not
Forever and ever

So scream all you want
Because nobody cares
As I drag you away
Into my lair
:icongandalfgirl579:
Another repost...

This one is a little more obscure, and maybe a bit creepypasta-ish...
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:iconpoeknowsprose:
Very creepy, but in a good way! I love how you subtly introduced the creepiness and then went full out creepy in the last stanza. Good job.
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~Gandalfgirl579 Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much! :heart: Glad you liked it!
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:iconterios117:
Have to admit, you certainly creepified it :L Great work though I thought it was really good! :aww:
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~Gandalfgirl579 Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :heart:
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:iconterios117:
No problem! Keep up the fantastic work! :aww:
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:icongandalfgirl579:
~Gandalfgirl579 Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I plan to! ;)
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:iconterios117:
Sounds good! :D
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